A different approach to writing Meta ads

Updated
July 15, 2025
Written by:
Peter Lewis
CEO

When was the last time you instantly decided to make a large purchase because you saw a Facebook ad?

If nothing comes to mind - you're in the majority.If you're not already looking for a car, house, home remodel, HVAC system - seeing an ad isn't going to get you to buy.

So, with that being said, how has Service Allies been able to generate millions of dollars in revenue for remodelers, and tens of millions of dollars in revenue for HVAC companies, remodelers, etc?

Let's find out, and look at how we can use ad copywriting to reach the right customers.

Talk to Customers Who Are Currently IN The Market

Watch This Video on How to Talk to People Already in the Market:

At any given time, a segment of people seeing your ads are in the market for a new HVAC system, home remodel, or other home service. Rather than trying to get people to start thinking about a new HVAC system, you simply talk to the customers who are already in buying mode.

This helps you attract the right crowd, and weed out people who are too early on in the funnel.

Talk to Your Best Customers

In the book "Copywriting Secrets," by Jim Edwards, he talks about "joining the conversation that's already in the customers mind.

"Rather than trying to sell your business and what's so great about you, think about your ideal customers.

What are they looking for?

What do they want to avoid?

How have they been burned in the past?

If your business offers high end, design-build projects, think about the concerns that your ideal customer might have.

"Oh, that last guy who gave us a quote was a little bit slow in getting back to us. Is that what communication is going to be like for the duration of the project?"

"I can't really think of a good design for my kitchen and the last contractor didn't really seem like they would do something unique and special."

You can word your ads to address these concerns:

"Don't settle for a contractor who can't communicate - Go with ABC Remodels for your custom kitchen, and get a professional team who's at the ready and always keeps you in the loop!"

"Need help planning a kitchen that's really unique, and really, well, YOU? See what Mary Jones had to say after ABC Remodels built her dream kitchen..."

On the flip side, maybe your company is better at the kitchen tune-up model.

You sand and paint cabinets, add a backsplash, swap out cabinet hardware, and install a new light fixture.

The best fit for you are going to be middle to lower middle class customers who are thinking "I really hate how outdated my kitchen looks, but I can't afford a kitchen remodel."

You can join the conversation that your best customers are having in their minds - "Hate how outdated your kitchen looks? We can completely transform your kitchen for under $3,000!"

Or, you can run some kind of financing promotion "Hate your outdated kitchen? Completely transform the look of your kitchen for as low as $119 per month!"

The Compounding Effect

The messaging of your ads will appeal to customers who resonate with that messaging. As they stop and read your ads, they'll start clicking, and they'll start filling out their info.

Meta's ads platform automatically optimizes for leads (or clicks, or conversions, depending on how you set up the ad.) It will take your ad, and try to show it to more people who resonate with it.

So if the messaging of your ad correctly resonates with your perfect type of customer, Facebook's algorithm will help you get in front of that ideal type of customer more and more.

Conclusion

It's easy to focus on "what's going to get people to buy?"

"What's going to make people click / fill out their info?"

And while discounts and other promotions do help in some cases, a simple approach is to look at who your company already serves best, and then try to write ads that will appeal to that customer profile.

If you want help building ads for your home service or home improvement company, contact Service Allies today.

Frequently Asked Questions

What makes Service Allies different from other HVAC Facebook ads companies?

What makes us different from other Facebook ads companies is the pains we take to make the leads good quality. This includes the way ads are written, images that are used, the video ads we create, qualifying questions we ask in the lead form, and getting feedback from you to know which campaigns are getting the best quality leads.

How will we get notified when new leads come in?

You can get notified by text, email, app notification, or any combination of the three.

Is there a contract?

There’s no long term commitment with Service Allies. It’s a month to month agreement!

How do people see the ads?

Local homeowners see the ads depending on where we tell Facebook to target. We can use zip codes, or multiple targeting radiuses, to show ads in the areas you want. Homeowners who are on Facebook or Instagram in those areas see your sponsored ad as they scroll.

How many leads can we generate?

It depends on 1) how low we can get your cost per lead and 2) your monthly ad spend budget. Lead costs typically fall between $25 and $75 per lead. If you spend $5000 per month on ads, that would mean between 200 and 66 leads. The more populated your service area is, the higher the scaling potential.

How much do you charge?

You will have two separate costs. The first cost is ad spend, which Facebook will bill you directly for. I typically recommend a monthly budget of $1000 - $2000 to start. Since the average lead cost is $50 in ad spend per lead, this should get you roughly between 20-40 leads monthly. If you need more or less, we can adjust advertising spend as you need. The second cost is our agency fees, which are only available on a live demo call.

How good are the leads?

Normally, between 20% and 40% can normally be booked for sales appointments. This requires that you follow up with the leads consistently, and have a good process for getting them scheduled.

How long does it take to start working?

When a new client signs up, we start with an onboarding call, and launch 7 days later. Over the past 5 years I’ve run this lead generation program, I’ve never seen it take longer than 2-3 days after launch to start getting leads.

How many people are you working with in my market?

We only serve one contractor in a local market. Even if you are part of a large metro area, we’ll single out an exclusive zone just for you. We still have a relatively small client base at the time of writing, so there is a good chance your market is still available. However, the sooner you reach out the better.

How many contractors are going to get the leads?

Just you. Facebook ads will be shown under your business name, and all the generated leads will be exclusively yours.

What if I'm not on Facebook or don't have a business page?

No problem. It's fairly simple to set up a Facebook business page, so we can do this for you at no extra charge. Also, don't worry if your current Facebook page doesn't have many likes. It doesn't seem to affect the volume or quality of leads at all.

How do you get the leads?

We get leads by running ads on Facebook. Ads are like Facebook posts, except you pay Facebook to show your ad to a specific local area and demographic. If you currently don’t use Facebook, or don’t have a Facebook page, that is no problem. We’ll set up a page on your behalf to run ads from.